Feedback on First Draft

This is the feedback my group received for our music video when we showcased it to our

class as a first draft . We received good and critical feedback based on our artist, concept, editing and locations. We have also received feedback and constructive criticism on how to improve the video in terms of cuts and different editing techniques. The feedback notes how during our video there a maybe too much side angles of our artist performing; from this, me and my group understand that we must cycle through different angles in order to show clear understanding and variety. Also where there are not enough edited cuts. Overall we have received more positive feedback than negative feedback and we will improve on parts which needs to be improved on in order to create a music video that relates to the overall lyrics and concept of the song and get the best possible grade.